Wow! Last week was such a busy week with Ultimate Frisbee, Writing Samples, and much more. We were tested on the 16th of June (Last week). It was really challenging to write it. But yesterday we put it into Write That Essay and I got my feedback to 98%. It was stuck on 98% and really frustrating to get it higher. Next time I could use more sentences types and try to use less exclamation marks. I also started repeating sentences in the introduction. Anyways, with all that said, look at my writing by clicking this link. Below is some screenshots of before and after.
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